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Interesting Song

The only reason you got an 8 on effort is because you didn't end the song! This is an excellent intro, can grow up to many different things. The biggest idea in my head right now is a female voice, singing about sunshine (from the title). Maybe you have a friend of girlfriend that could help you out.

Also try submitting your finished product to soundclick.com or acidplanet.com for bigger representation of the song. If you do take on this project, I would enjoy listening to it, you could be something kid!

-Dj Tufts (on my old username- JVUnderground)

treebob1 responds:

thnx 4 tht advice tht does acctully tell me to do tht and i ve got 3 songs on soundclick already and tht is gd dont like acidplanet and i admit i didnt think the ending was super but i couldnt do anything else cause it didnt really go with the end but thnx 4 the advice m8.

Suprised

This song is cool man, my favorite part is the piano right at start. Like always I have to praise your drums which are obviously your strong point.

keep up the work

i2abbitz responds:

yea. i love piano in techno/trance/breakbeats.. whatever. and i've learned how to make my beats go harder by my homeboy "peaches." i put up some of his music up on here. check it out. thanks for the review

Love the drums

Wow some of your songs deserve a 4 and not a 2 or 3 thats on there. Like I said ur drums rule.

Tip on this song: make a middle part of the song where it slows down, less eletronic sounds or in other words acoustic. Then fade in the eletronic after a while.

i2abbitz responds:

yea i was thinkin it got a little boring towards the middle.. but i was just copying the original with my little twists.. it sounds a lot better with the vocals in it. thanks for the review!~

Wow thats pretty good

Cruel Intentions indeed

dude your drums are really good!

im gona be following ur work from now on

i2abbitz responds:

haha thanks!

trippy

Wow I love trippy music. This is definately one to listen if you're waiting to listen to sounds that suprise you greatly from the background.

Gillenium responds:

thanks! Yeah, I don't usually bother with the ordinary.

Dark Feeling - Ilike it

Well you reviewed my song, so I decided to see some of your songs here. They all (nearly) have quite a dark feeling which is cool, as it is hard to potray this feeling. I like the piano here btw. :)

Ill accompany u from now on

MaestroSorrow responds:

Thank you, I try to portray difficult emotions and images as best as I am able... heh... 9/10 I fail.

Thanks for the review, i'll be sure to accompany you as well.

It started well

Like the title above it started well. I loved the lead, very original. You could of spiced it up with small variations of it, but thats ok. What made me give you a 7 was the kick that came in the middle of the song. It sounded offbeat and also totally unnecessary. Keep up the good work though.

phoozle responds:

Thanks I like your review one of the best ive recieved thank you...
Ill pass this on to my friend
(The guy who made it)

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